Chapter 21 of Enticements and Obstruction has been posted

As you all already know,  John posted Chapter 8 of Linden Gardens, Notting Hill this morning.  You car go read it by clicking here.

As many of you know, from time to time John and I write overlapping chapters, where we show you the same scene from different points of view.  Writing in first person, I can only show you what Rick sees and hears.  John, on the other hand, can show you the other characters. What that means is that this chapter is even more of a collaboration than most of our writing, and we really worked closely together on this chapter to get each character's tone just right. With that all said, I would recommend reading John's chapter first, and then coming back to see the events from Rick's POV. But ultimately the reading order is up to you.

 I will tell you that this is the last of such chapters in this story.  There will be a few more overlapping moments in future chapters, but for the most part, Enticements and LGNH will diverge and show you completely different events with little repetition.

You'll find Chapter 21on the Enticements and Obstructions blog by clicking here. Chapter 22 will be posted in two weeks.  Happy reading and if you have a moment, leave a comment and let me know what you thought.  Your feedback (good, bad, or indifferent) is always appreciated!

xoxo

Liz